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Monday, 26 August 2013

Crocodile Creek




As we took our first step into the creek  we were taken to a  VIP room, when  we saw this tall muscular man standing at the entrance of the access door. “How can  I help you ? “He said in a low- pitched voice . “We were transmitted here  by a  young  lady who was called by the name of Bridget. “Why yes you are our assistants right. Hello my name is Johnson  Anderson  and you  are?” Johnson had said to the young handsome men.

“I'm  Michael and this is my brother Jason, and yes we are here to do  our jobs as the assistants for the new crocodile show.” Michael had said to  Johnson very politely. “Come with me we will now go and get you ready for the show, come along ” he said to the two young men. They both were directed to their dressing room . They were both dressed attractively in their tux.

They walked out with the magician. Michael had shivers running down his neck straight to his spine. Jason looked just as confident as the magician. They walked out into the creek. There was a row of crocodiles in the creek. Michael was shoved up in the corner of the changing room to freaked out to walk into the creek.

Jason dragged him out, and the crowd went wild. Michael put a fake smile on his face and was waving. Jason suggested that he should keep calm and move on. “What if I lose my mind and go psycho”. Michael said, “just be yourself and act normal thats all it takes” Jason said. As they stepped into the creek there were a lot of crocodiles trapped in a cage. The conductor turned around and whispered quietly to them, “we will be letting the crocodiles out in a minute, then it will be your turns to take the stage.

As the cage opened the crocodiles came rushing out. There was about two baby crocodiles, three male crocodiles and six females. As Michael and Jason stood there  frozen with fear. When the crocodiles were coming in the direction of Michael and Jason they were signaled to move closer to the crocodiles.
Just as the crocodiles came closer they sat at the feet of the two brothers. And as they looked down at their feet the crocodiles looked up gradually and gazed at them. Then the brothers threw the meat up and Michael said in a enormous voice “FETCH”, then the crocodiles bent their heads around and slowly walked towards the meat and about 10 minutes later they were all congested around the piece of meat.

Michael and Jason were relieved that the show was over. As they walked out of the creek they both said to each other that they will never get caught in that trouble again!  




Thursday, 22 August 2013

Easter Bunny Hop Part 1


Every year Manchester has a Easter celebration, that celebration is called the Easter Bunny Hop. The whole of Manchester gathers around the town hall and everyone joins in the dance called the bunny hop. It is a challenge when the whole of Manchester bunny hops around the town hall. It usually turns out the way we expected it to, but the last bunny hop turned out to be a disaster.


“Here it goes. It was year 1900 when this happens. The Manchester children always had one chance to be in this competition. The children Anne William, Sabrina Wright, Jonathan Walters  and Andy Summers had disappeared after that night of the Bunny hop. They had competed and all at the same time they were eliminated for attending the competition.

Not for only being under aged but if you are not the right age then something bad will happen to you not might it will happen to you or your life you never know, one or the other. Anyway back to the chase they were never seen again the next week and the next week and so on.” Said the leader of the Easter Bunny Hop.

“But what happen after that”, said little Eric. The Easter holiday came up and the Easter bunny hop was already here there was no sign of children in the competition. There were about 725 adults competing in the Easter Bunny Hop the Wright family won the competition. Then the family made their way to the Chinese take aways to celebrate them winning the Easter bunny hop and bringing home a 3 foot tall trophy.

As the Wright family travelled home from their celebration dinner. On their way up the driveway they saw something rather mysterious. As soon as their headlights hit the house a shadow zoomed passed the house. The family hadn’t noticed it until Eric shouted out “GHOST” in shock. They all did not believe at first, but then suddenly something had shook the car and that is when they all started to believe.

They quickly drove up the driveway to get service to Mr Wright’s cell phone. He called 111 emergency and asked for police. As they waited still and calm in the car waiting for the police.
Once the police made it they were all sleeping in the car.  The police sirens had awoken the family.

When the family got out of the car Little Eric explained the whole story of what happened that  very night. When Eric had finished his 20 min story the police had investigated the house and recognized that whatever they saw did not leave any footprints or any evidence behind it after it had left.

So where did it disappear to....... To Be continued



Thursday, 18 April 2013

Mysterious Journey

Congratulations on the marriage Amy and Sebastian. Hope you had the time of your lives, from Auntie Jamie. As Amy read on she decided to take a trip to a faraway destination where it would free her mind of everything. They packed the car with their bags and belongings ready to leave for Alligators Creek. “I wonder  what it will be like there. Maybe it will be quiet and so peaceful”, Amy said to Sebastian. 

Amy finished packing the caravan and they both seated themselves in a comfy spot in front of it. Sebastian was driving and Amy had her eyes focused on the laptop staring at something unusual. He stopped the caravan in shock and fear because he glanced at the laptop.  He got out of his seat and opened the door and jumped out furiously  and opened Amy’s door.  Amy fell out of the caravan her body frozen and no words to say. She was lying on the road still and silent. Sebastian hopped into the caravan and drove off leaving the body of his wife.  He looked into his side mirror and Amy's body had vanished.

Sebastian crashed into the tree at the side of the road and the airbag hit his face forcing his head to hit the back of the chair. He got out of the caravan and  full to the ground too weak to pick himself up. Sebastian was miserable, he wondered where his wife's body had disappeared too. He was on the ground unconscious and the ambulance came speeding around a narrow corner, the Police followed on behind the ambulance.

Sebastian had awoken and found himself in the ambulance and by that time they were already at the hospital. He was asking the paramedics questions like where is my wife? because he had forgotten about the incident that had happened.

One whole year later Sebastian got a letter that looked unusual to him it had “police justice” written on the top left corner, he opened it in a rush. It had said to whom it may concern,  we have found the body of Mrs Anderson behind the mountain named Mount Tongariro. We will be continuing with this investigation but if we  have any further evidence we will alert you immediately. Sebastian fell to the ground and was sobbing non-stop. 

One night he heard a bang at the front door, he got up went straight to the kitchen grabbed a knife and walked to the door. Sebastian was about a metre away from the door. The door suddenly swung open and hit the wall. Who could it be?